The thing that still looks strange is the body of the girl, it's hard to tell the difference between front and back view. Maybe you can put a logo on her shirt.
That is what happens when you take shortcuts. The rear torso is a duplicate of the front, But you are right I should maybe add something like a logo to differentiate the 2. Although, I am currently drawing a jacket and some other clothes for her so maybe that will fix that.
The problem with the first scene is the perspective. Her whole body points towards the guy, but her head looks straight to the right. Attaching the angled back view (you know what I mean) might look better, but I'm not sure.
Excellent point, I think you are right on the money there.



